Forum: Politics
Topic: Feedback/Critisism
started by: TheTaxMan

Posted by TheTaxMan on Jul. 06 2002,08:11
What do you think the general theme is?  If you reply and other people already have, don't read what their responses were.  I'm trying to get a general concensus as to what people think of the theme(s).


Logic

Twisted mind, broken spine
tortured eyes and diseased heart.
Those are not
the characteristics of a sane
man.  But I find comfort in the simple
joys.

A cheerless moon
counts the sylables in my head
while its brother fog
drinks my mind.  Maybe the vampires
will be out tonight.  This
is not the quandry of a sane
man.  But I find truth in nature's
twists.

An insane man.  An interesting puzzle.
If a cloud noticed, "I am airy
and I am nothing"
would it continue to rain?  Would the tree
that decided, "These leaves bring
too much shade"
continue to grow fruit?  If the tree truly
knew itself, we would be done for.
Posted by BlackFlag on Jul. 06 2002,08:22
i think you're saying that people do what they do because they don't know what they're doing.  VERY good.  Very true also.  Most people have no idea why they do what they do.  Its been scientificly proven that people act first, and think second....  they make an action, then rationalize it.  This is fact.  
good poem.
Posted by PersonGuy on Jul. 06 2002,21:12
I think it's talking about how we waste time doing things of little significance. And if we could recognise those things, then we could stop doing them. Becoming enlighted... making life more efficent. Good work.
Posted by forumwhore on Jul. 07 2002,01:43
Thanks PersonGuy, there's my next topic.
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