Forum: The Classroom
Topic: A poem.
started by: damien_s_lucifer

Posted by damien_s_lucifer on Jan. 10 2001,21:02
Thick green snot
flows richly
from my nose.
Posted by Neophyre on Jan. 10 2001,21:10
Twinkle Twinkle Little Pig
How i wonder how you dig
Is it with your rotten nails
or do you get help from snails?
Posted by Pisces Iscariot on Jan. 10 2001,21:53
Mary had a little lamb,
it's fleece was black as charcol,
and everytime it jumped the fence,
you could see it's dirty ar - you can imagine the rest

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I Like Your Old Stuff Better Than Your New Stuff...


Posted by PersonGuy on Jan. 10 2001,23:18
Little boy blue,
Go watch your porn.
You sit on the bed-o;
No cloths to be worn.

And where is the lotion,
So smooth and so sweet?
It's in his right hand
Beating his meat

Off the top of my head everybody... that's right... yah...

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Posted by solid on Jan. 11 2001,02:24
pure genius personguy.
*claps*
Posted by Cyrino on Jan. 11 2001,02:34
Props to Personguy, nicely done.
Posted by whiskey@throttle on Jan. 11 2001,03:57
A tough act to follow, PG...

oh, 'twas a blistering shame -
to a shitty day, the ironic cap
a downright disgrace to my name
sitting in math class, my pants filled with crap.

at lunch time I had a cheerful little grin
and a side of chili fries
now panic had set in:
the stink began to rise

a bead of sweat collected on my head
did they know? could they smell?
“why the hell did I wear shorts,” I said
as a moist little nugget fell

I know - a handful of dump
paints quite a foul scenario
still, I swept up from thigh to rump
and wiped it all over miss mary jo.

This message has been edited by whiskey@throttle on January 11, 2001 at 10:58 PM


Posted by damien_s_lucifer on Jan. 11 2001,07:19
good work, people. I knew this would be an interesting topic

men
walking to the moon
as birds watch
but cannot feel their essence.


Posted by kuru on Jan. 11 2001,08:03
darkfall
and with it the dirge for
a parade
of coffins.

another trip or ten around
the sun over,
marked off by one teary-eyed soldier
in an tireless cadence.

the passing of
years
is the passing of
coffins.

and the weathered old gravestones
topple over unnoticed
as the parade of faces
fades away.

while those coffins
lay rotting
and the dead are forgotten
through the turning of the years.

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kuru
'dancing is the vertical expression of horizontal desire.'
-robert frost

This message has been edited by kuru on January 12, 2001 at 03:06 AM


Posted by incubus on Jan. 11 2001,08:48
Not a poem, but a song that's a poem, and I love it ... nb look out for my sig lol

I spy with my little eye
The sun shining brightly
The clouds rolling by
The last days of winter
Now seem so far away
And everything looks green
When it used to be grey
And I've watched the change
Like the changing in my mind
And I chased the leaves
Like the words I never find
Like the people I knew
Who I sometimes see today
Some still bright like fire
And some faded away

I turn on the radio
And someone's playing a song
I turn on the news
Hear what's going on
I turn on my back
When I'm full of beer
And I turn off the news
When I don't want to hear

And I've seen a girl who looks so very sad
Nothing left but a memory of all the times she's had
And I've seen a man who looks so sad inside
Nothing left but the memories from which he cannot hide

So I learned to fight
With a Weapon Called The Word
And I learned to raise my voice
So that I'd be heard
And I learned to fight W
ith a weapon called the word
And I learned to raise my voice
But I've never been heard

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-- incubus
As I chase the leaves like the words I never find ...


Posted by hyperponic on Jan. 11 2001,09:45
"all the locals hide their tears of regret,
you feel the tightening but you don't know it yet
skyhigh with a heartache of stone,
you'll never see me 'cauz i'm always alone"
Posted by PersonGuy on Jan. 11 2001,14:08
ROFL! You've got me beat wiskey-man! LOL!

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Posted by incubus on Jan. 11 2001,14:32
Ah, but hyper, I know that's "Hero" by Ministry ) anyone work out who my lyrics are by?

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-- incubus
As I chase the leaves like the words I never find ...


Posted by Spydir Web on Jan. 11 2001,15:07
I wrote this for a poetry project in english class last year...
code:

The Mind's Voice
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I write these words with my mind.
But what I say and what I do is my bind.
You call me evil, sadistic, brainiac.
But all you do is make yourself look like a maniac.
I've been locked away in what seemed like forever,
to let my mind run and come to it's own indevers.
I've watched, listened, felt, tasted, and smelt your fear.
Fear of Death, Life, and what's coming near.
I've noticed few understand me and my ways,
so now I write for days and days.
I remember when I was like you.
Doing all my work, doing all that I had to do.
Then I heard a word I'll never forget.
The word of myself and the people I've yet to met.
I saw that I made my life happend and what would be done.
I decided what to do an dwhen to shot the gun.
Now I hear complaints about school shootings and how our country is curupt.
If you're going to complain, fight the politics and don't give up.
Shut up with how video games, music, and TV mess with my head.
It's all your crap and how you won't respect the dead.
I've watched children die on TV, and you take it to the edge.
And I now know your society is on the ledge.
The ledge of where things end, and where you die.
For now, all I can do is sit back and cry.

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Core Arctic - < http://welcome.to/CoreArctic/ >


Posted by hyperponic on Jan. 11 2001,16:14
quote:
Originally posted by incubus:
Ah, but hyper, I know that's "Hero" by Ministry ) anyone work out who my lyrics are by?

close, close...NWO by Ministry . no idea who wrote the lyrics you posted. hmm. *ponders* was it dylan?

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Posted by damien_s_lucifer on Jan. 11 2001,19:09
when did this thread get all serious?

well, okay, if you insist - some pre-Paxil poetry by yours truly :

Patient’s statement 06-18-2000 :

"oozing on the floor on the border between Oregon and California the days get longer sometimes and shorter still others and sometimes the sun sunburns and the clouds chill the flowers who blossom and fade away in the same old eternal circle which I now accept as an illusion. I resisted with sound and fury that sparkled into the void and had no effect whatsoever. error dissipates rapidly in a distributed system and truth be told there is no blue pill there is no red pill there is no rabbit hole there is no wonderland just black hole singularities :

the dreamer types shine brightly to feed us illusions and false hope to gather us and thieve our sweat and blood to rise above the proletariat. you elitist motherfuckers WE WILL BURY YOU."

(Doctor’s notes. Evidence of schizophrenia. Haldol 5mg injection)

hush child. don’t rock the boat.
we need you to be calm, okay?
united we stand
divided we fall
there are no fragments
there are no partitions
there is no wall
hush now and let us bury you


Posted by PersonGuy on Jan. 11 2001,23:19
"click...

i need sugar
i need a little watersugar
i get thoughts about you
and the night it wants me
like a little lost child
locked in a safe place
lookin out the window
the dark move fast past
the window
the dark on the otherside of
the locked door

click...

my thumb's on a tetris keyring
moving in brilliant timing
you pick up the phone
and i'm imagining

click...

tiny wires in her ears
(slide into the city)
tiny wires in her ears
(slide into the city

click...

- expected early in the mornin'

rising in the morning stopped to you (beneath the feet of the city)
click
you disconnect from me
click
when you're gone you take your century

telephone breath between us
the whole world is between us
only these wires
dust between the wires
and the green grass

in the distance
i am your tourist

- expected early in the mornin'

moving in brilliant timing...

i need sugar...
click..."

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Posted by Prometheus on Jan. 12 2001,21:09
*ransacks Creative Writing assignments*

#include teachercomments.lib

"hi" we say
and exchange idle words --
we pass each other by.
is there something there,
a reason to live and love?

hurting.
i want
pain to pleasure, //comment: "this part gets a litle confusing"
fear to joy.
in a moment of heaven,
will my wish come true?

"hi" we say,
exchange idle pleasantries--
and pass each other by...
again.

Why do I try?

/* come to think of it, "confusing" appears on many of those assignments... */

edit: poor typing skills

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Necesse est multos timeat quem multi timent.

This message has been edited by Prometheus on January 13, 2001 at 04:11 PM


Posted by damien_s_lucifer on Jan. 14 2001,20:42
quote:
Originally posted by Cyclone:
Hmmm...suprisingly good

On that note, my snot has turned from green to yellow.

Keep on posting...

This message has been edited by damien_s_lucifer on January 15, 2001 at 03:43 PM


Posted by PersonGuy on Jan. 14 2001,23:42
Mikey-man started a poetry thread a while back... I'm too lazy to dig up the link, just search...

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Posted by askheaves on Jan. 14 2001,23:50
I thought the point of this page was to write little stupid little poems that inspire the heart and giggle the bowels.

I don't write poetry. It scares me and annoys others.


Posted by masher on Jan. 15 2001,02:41
A haiku has five
syllables in a line and
then seven and five

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"All is number" - Pythagoras


Posted by Cyclone on Jan. 15 2001,05:52
Hmmm...suprisingly good! Make a regular poem section for detnet...

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-Sometimes a dagger in the dark is more effective than a hundred swords at dawn. -Officio Assassinorium


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