Forum: The Classroom
Topic: An honest opinion
started by: Mike

Posted by Michael on Nov. 02 2000,14:40
You seem to have broken a lot of links by switching to cgi scripts; now all of your links are pointing to items in the cgi-bin which do not exist. The animated background is rather distracting as well; making the lines darker and static might improve the look. You could also try having the grid subdivided into smaller (and darker) lines as well to make it look more scientific and high-tech. The current pattern is somewhat reminiscent of a tablecloth.

On the other hand, the coloring scheme is cool, although sticking to 2 colors in the "yo" and "links" headings just to make the .gifs more efficient may be too much of a tradeoff. Also, your main logo is quite well optimized and could be even smaller if it were not dithered. Still, <6K is quite a good logo size. Some sites *cough* detnet *cought* have logos in excess of 26K which are annoying to download...

If you are using a monochromatic coloring scheme, it is generally a good idea to vary the intensities of the color that you use. It looks to me like right now all of your images are the same bright green; adding some darker shades of green with the same hue would give the site a more high-tech look.

One last thing: all of your links are the same color as your text. Using a different color for the links would be a good idea, so that people know where to click...


Posted by askheaves on Nov. 02 2000,15:07
I agree with everything Michael said. When looking at the site, my eyes started burning. There was something painful about it, perhaps the high contrast (either bright green or black...). Lighten it up with a mixing of greens and blue or purple. Maybe even a little bit of metallic texture scattered around.
For god sakes, get rid of that moving background. It hurts. That's a good place to mix the colores up a bit. With everything being in green, I feel like I'm on my old XT with the green setting pressed on the monitor (although this site looks like the amber button has been pressed).
Posted by Michael on Nov. 02 2000,15:54
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Originally posted by askheaves:
Lighten it up with a mixing of greens and blue or purple. Maybe even a little bit of metallic texture scattered around.

You are just using too bright a shade of green. 100\% green is brighter than red or blue on the monitor, so it just stands out too much. That suggestion of metallic texture is an excellent one; if you are going for a sort of monochrome console look, include metallic looking parts which will correspond to areas that aren't the screen itself.

To get a good metallic look in Photoshop, there are several things you can do. My favorite is to add monochromatic noise and then a long motion blur to get a brushed metal look, but you can also use clouds and a multiply effect to add a bit of variation. The key to a metallic look is not having just one plain color, but gradients. That, and shading the edges to get a 3D effect.

As for the green stuff, monochrome writing would usually have a green glow around it, so you could try copying the green areas to a new layer, doing a gaussian blur on that layer, and setting its mode to "lighten." This creates a glow around everything.

This message has been edited by Michael on November 02, 2000 at 11:18 AM


Posted by Michael on Nov. 02 2000,16:13
Oh, and some more hints on getting a good metallic look for anyone who's interested:

The key to making metal look real is imperfection. Scratches and dents on the surface, rust, etc. are a good way to do this. For rust, create a layer with mode "color burn" and around 50\% opacity. Then just spraypaint the rust into the corners, in a pattern as random as possible. For dents and scratches, create a new layer, spraypaint a random pattern on the surface of the metal, do a gaussian blur, emboss, and switch the layer mode to "overlay."


Posted by Mike on Nov. 02 2000,16:53
Thanks for the feedback, i was already thinking of the metallic texture, but i was waiting to finish downloading psp7.0. its 32 megs and i'm on the dialup from hell =P. I'll see what i can do about the links and colors in the meantime.

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Posted by Mike on Nov. 02 2000,17:46
i've had a webpage for about the past month and a half, and i redesigned the whole thing today. It doesnt have much in the way of content, after all it is kind of a personal webpage, but i was wondering if i could get some opinions on it. the url is < http://s0ap.virtualave.net >

thanks - Mike

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Posted by Blain on Nov. 02 2000,18:18
hehe, i just tiled that background gif as my desktop wallpaper. Now my eyes hurt and i can't stand up streight although, it was kind of cool to see my whole desktop sliding down my monitor.

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Of course, that’s just my opinion; I could be wrong. -Dennis Miller


Posted by Mike on Nov. 02 2000,19:22
ok, nevermind about the links, i fixed it

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"if brute force doesn't work, you aren't using enough"


Posted by askheaves on Nov. 02 2000,21:13
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Originally posted by Blain:
hehe, i just tiled that background gif as my desktop wallpaper. Now my eyes hurt and i can't stand up streight although, it was kind of cool to see my whole desktop sliding down my monitor.


That rules! It's all moving, and stuff.. Try this: Stretch instead of tile. It's even weirder.


Posted by BLacK-JEsuS on Nov. 02 2000,21:33
Evil plan? To build a Target store at ground zero? < http://s0ap.virtualave.net/images/evil_plan2.gif >
Posted by Mike on Nov. 03 2000,05:02
hey Michael, which links didn't work? they all work on my end.

oh yeah, in case you are wondering about the times on the news posts, i just started using newspro yesterday, and i converted all of the old posts over to it. If someone knows how to change the dates on posts in newspro, the help would be greatly appreciated.
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This message has been edited by Mike on November 02, 2000 at 12:08 PM


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